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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Alright, so the design is pretty nice. The way she's standing, the big eyes, you pretty much managed to establish her childish, clumsy, innocent character through appearance alone. Try not to do this too much though; you want a little mystery, you can't just throw the character at the viewer and say "THIS IS MY CHARACTER AND HERE'S WHAT SHE DOES", that's not believable. You can't judge a book by its cover, so try not to give too much away. This is okay though.
Also, I'm sure you've improved but my God, LOOK AT THIS ANIMATION.
Just look at it.
The way the arms are suddenly out for one or two frames and then by her side again, the position of the feet, it's just awful (I know I'm being harsh but that's what you apparently want so there ya go).
Also, I'd recommend maybe expanding the colour palette. Like, orange is blue's compliment, right? Throw in a little orange somewhere, just try it out. Maybe it'll work, maybe it won't, just don't be afraid to experiment a little and mess around with the design.
So that's my second attempt at a critique. Overall, decent design, not-so-decent colour choices, choppy animation, and needs some work. Then again this is an old one so most of the stuff I've said is most likely obsolete, but hey, I tried.
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